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Seer of Sevenwaters (or how a strong, interesting character was compromised) [Jan. 26th, 2011|03:24 am]
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Let me begin my brief, subjective review of Seer of Sevenwaters with this: I love Juliet Marillier. She is, hands down, my favourite fantasy author. Despite my criticism of any of the Sevenwaters books, I have always found the female characters to be strong, independent and interesting. I believe the previous books in the series to be well written, wonderful, touching books.

Seer of Sevenwaters was not. In fact, it was melodramatic, "stand by your man", sexist crap that I was hoping to avoid with this addition to the Sevenwaters series.

Let's start with Sibeal, since she our protagonist. Sibeal was introduced to the series one book previously in Heir to Sevenwaters. We only meet her briefly, but long enough to know that she is a seer and she will probably be the focus of the next Sevenwaters book.

Sibeal's character "development" was a disappointment. Instead of her character progressing, she regressed from a strong, interesting character to an annoying, boy-obsessed teenager who was compromised in two or three short months. Sibeal had a tonne of potential: she was intelligent, level headed, calm and not a carbon copy of Marillier's characters beforehand. But what I was most excited about was the fact that Marillier could actually be writing a female character who had another purpose in life than to meet the "one", the "other half" or her "soulmate". I was excited by the prospect of there being a Sevenwaters heroine who cared enough about something else other than her "man".

Sibeal had been training in the nemetons of Sevenwaters, under Ciaran's care, to become a druid. It was her calling and she loved it. It was a part of her and she was the ear to the gods. Sibeal is also a seer who occasionally has visions and is apt at scrying.

Sibeal was constantly berated while on Inis Eala by all the women and men around her about her decision. No matter where she turned, people (men and women alike, including her sister) were silently judging her for her decision to follow a druidic path. They all just rolled their eyes because, come on, how could a woman possibly be happy without getting married and having children?! It's all that matters, right?! Well, according to this book, you're not a complete woman unless you're married and with child!

In the beginning, I felt like it was somewhat of a commentary on the sort of sexist ideal that a woman cannot be complete and happy with her life unless there is some sort of "soulmate" involved.

But, that all changed when Felix (aka: the worst male character written in history) washed upon the shores of Sevenwaters, half dead.

I will explain why Felix is the worst character of all time: he is annoying, entitled and selfish. Your crew left some crewman on an abandoned isle with a giant, man-eating sea serpent guarding it? WE HAVE TO GO BACK DESPITE PUTTING AN ENTIRE OTHER CREW IN DANGER (Jack Shephard style)! You get a crush on a young girl becoming a druid who clearly has other things going for her in life than marriage and children? HOW DARE SHE! I WILL APPROACH HER MENTOR BEHIND HER BACK AND GET ANGRY! I WILL CONSTANTLY EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE HER! I WILL FALL INTO THE DEPTHS OF DESPAIR AND ACT LIKE A MOODY CHILD WHEN SHE DOESN'T ACCEPT ME THE FIRST THREE TIMES!

How is it realistically possible, fantasy novel or not, for these two individuals to fall in love? Not only is Felix practically a corpse for his first month on Inis Eala without the ability to speak, but in total Felix and Sibeal have only known each other over the course of the summer. Sibeal doesn't know a scrap about him until his outburst in the infirmary after Knut tries to assassinate him. She makes up all these ideas about him in her head and applies them to him.

And honestly, what is so great about Felix that makes Sibeal want to give up her life's dream at the drop of a hat? I can't see it. There is nothing to his character. He was never particularly interesting and it seems like the moment he could speak he was overly expressing fondness for Sibeal in a creepy way.

The way Sibeal and Felix talked about each other nearing the end of the novel honestly made me sick.

Ciaran, I love Felix. I love him with my whole heart. He has transformed my life. Up until this summer, I never had the slightest doubt about my vocation. ... I love the gods, and I believe they still call me to their service. But I love this man too; I want to be his wife and bear his children (WTF?!). I want the sort of life Clodagh has, full of tenderness and passion and surprises (because apparently you can't have that unless you have man and have babies). - Sibeal (with my occasional commentary)

You probably dismiss it as young love, a passion that burns brightly and is soon over (which it is, but hey), a candle flame that gutters and dies at the first cold draft. But it's not like that. Please believe me. Felix and I belong together (this is really creepy of her to say). I love him as my counterpart, my perfect completion - Sibeal (with my annoyed commentary, again)

How exactly is this a positive message for women to be reading? Don't worry about your life's work, toss it all away for a man! It may be a struggle, but you'll never be complete and have a life full of passion without him~

Felix is constantly possessive of Sibeal in an Edward Cullen-like way throughout this novel. From his thoughts about her, to his body language around her to the way he addressees Ciaran about her... it's all very "Sibeal is mine and she is the only thing that will make me happy". When he is discouraged from pursuing a relationship, he becomes incredibly moody, childish and irritating. He even so much says that he hates Ciaran, simply because he is a male character that Sibeal is close with and Felix sees him as an "obstacle" from getting what he wants.

Felix is the least fleshed out character in any of Marillier's novels. I don't believe I could care any less than I already do about his back story and I don't care for his personality, either. I don't like how he is used as a plot device to have Marillier wave her opinions on ~true love conquering all over hard work, dedication and loving your vocation/career/whatever.

Juliet Marillier lost an incredible opportunity to show her readers that she could write more than unrealistic fantasy romance novels revolving around barely believable couples. She could have written a strong female character who found friendship, but chose to pursue her vocation. Instead, she opted to diminish a woman's choice to not be domestic by writing Sibeal into an unrealistic and unbelievable relationship where, in the end, she decides to leave the nementons and marry her ~one true love after two months of knowing him.

I was incredibly disappointed with this book. I exclaimed out loud, numerous times while reading, "I hate this fucking book." The only reason I continued reading it was the small hope that maybe it would pick up and get better.
It was predictable, poorly constructed and not quite as wonderful, heartfelt and lovable as the previous books in the Sevenwaters series. I would suggest that any lovers of Sevenwaters avoid reading this book all together and pray that it ends here.

In my opinion, it was best left at a trilogy (although, I do love Heir to Sevenwaters).

Haha, alright, I got that out of my system. I just finished reading the book not even twenty minutes ago. I apologize if there are any glaring grammatical errors present in my review.

[User Picture]From: advancedcookie
2011-01-26 04:37 pm (UTC)
I agree! I really liked the story with Svala. I thought she was an interesting character. I actually kind of liked the "broad story" to this novel - with Svala, Knut and the crew. I think the book would have been much more enjoyable if Felix was simply written out. Period.
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